Fairytale Appropriation

I have decided to use the Alice in Wonderland story as inspiration for my project. My ideas so far are loosely based on Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and Through the Looking Glass, but I think that the viewer will still understand what I based my project on.

At the same time, my story will also have elements from A Christmas Carol and will relate to the main character Ebenezer Scrooge.

My story will involve a man with a character flaw who then gets into an accident. He will be in a coma for the majority of the story. Part of the story will be from an outside perspective in the hospital room where he will experience different elements (if a window is open and he gets a chill, if he's given a pain medication that could cause hallucinations). The other part of the story will be what his mind experiences while in a coma (the "wonderland" part). The outside influences will have an impact on his mind experiences. 

Adaptations:

Alice's Misadventures in Wonderland:

Alice Underground:

Alice: